User:Cemes4/Voltammetry/Yungad Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Cemes4, Shenassak, Jrumscheidt


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Cemes4/Voltammetry?preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Voltammetry
 * Voltammetry

Evaluate the drafted changes
A lot of the Theory section could be added under a different title. I enjoyed the section as it was really informative, but my only advice is to move some of the sentences to either the introduction or under a different named section. I saw that you merged the Theory and Voltammogram sections because there is a bit of overlap between the two, but it would be easier to read if there were still different sections. A big block of text is intimidating.

For the Types of Voltammetry section, a few examples for where each type of voltammetry is used could be added to each type to make it more real-life applicable to the reader. The description for each one is already pretty clear. (Or it could go under your proposed applications section.)

The things to add at the top of the page gives me a pretty clear idea of where the article is headed and it seems that your article already has that in mind too. They are all pretty good ideas so I don't have as much to say for this article overall. There just weren't that many edits yet, but I assume that it was because of 304 (or other work).

Citations are good, tons throughout the article.