User:Cepropst/Choose an Article

Article Selection
Please list articles that you're considering for your Wikipedia assignment below. Begin to critique these articles and find relevant sources.

Option 1: London Fog

 * Article title: London fog (drink):
 * Article Evaluation: The article includes a brief overview of the origin of the drink, the ingredients involved, and a few variants of the drink. The article links five sources, which seem to be credible and relevant to the article as they include an article that mentions an interview with the inventor of the drink, as well as information from a popular tea company. It is neutrally written and has citations for each claim. :
 * Sources: To improve this article I would look at more tea websites and see if there is mention of London Fog. I might also include more variants of the drink as well as any popularity ratings that I could find from reputable sources. I would use more descriptive wording to describe the drink. :

Option 2: Turmeric Tea

 * Article title: Turmeric Tea :
 * Article Evaluation: This article discusses the origin of turmeric tea. It needs more sources that are reputable and verifiable to add credibility. To improve this article I would hope to discuss more about the claimed health benefits involved in turmeric tea as well as the history behind the drink. :
 * Sources: The sources mentioned could be switched out for more credible, neutral informational sources. I would want to use health and medical journals about turmeric as a natural remedy as well as sources that have reputable tea knowledge. :

Option 3: Count Basie/Sarah Vaughan

 * Article title Count Basie/Sarah Vaughan:
 * Article Evaluation: This article is about the album Count Basie/Sarah Vaughan, which has a brief overview of the musicians involved in the recording as well as a track list. The sources mentioned are credible music organizations. It is neutrally written and includes citations for each song and musician mentioned. :
 * Sources: To improve this article I would try to find more information about the album, the musicians behind the album, and the process of making the album. I might want to give historical context for the timing of this album and the musicians involved. In addition, I would mention more about if the album ranked in the charts and the popular tracks. :

Option 4: It Never Entered My Mind

 * Article title: It Never Entered My Mind :
 * Article Evaluation: This is an article about the jazz song 'It Never Entered My Mind'. The article includes information about notable recordings and a short origin of the song. To improve this article, I would add more information about the writing of this song, the context in the show it was written for, as well as popularity rankings. :
 * Sources: The sources included seem to be relevant and credible, all information is neutrally written. I would add more sources to write more about the song and the origin.

Option 4: Vocal Jazz

 * Article title: Vocal Jazz :
 * Article Evaluation: This is an article about vocal jazz as a style of singing. It includes a brief history of vocal jazz and some notable singers in this category. It also includes neutral information about the origins of vocal jazz from other music categories and the musical theory in singing jazz music. :
 * Sources: The sources included seem to be relevant and credible, all information is neutrally written. I would add more sources to write more about the people who were big in expanding the vocal jazz arena.