User:Cepropst/Vocal jazz/Alexapar21 Peer Review

General info
Cepropst
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=User%3ACepropst%2FVocal_jazz&diff=1219289245&oldid=1218615824
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Vocal jazz

Evaluate the drafted changes
Hello! The vocal technique section you added was super insightful and relevant to the article, nice work there! I was curious to where you got the list of notable vocalists; is this from a specific source? Are these particular vocalists the most viewed pages of jazz vocalists on Wikipedia? Great job organizing the information. Intro is brief, but informative! The information you moved and added to the history section improved the article a lot. For your sources, I think you have a good start. It might be worthwhile to find more sources, which can bulk up your existing paragraphs — particularly for the history section, since there is a lot of rich history imbedded in vocal jazz. Are there any interviews with or magazines about the artists you mention? Perhaps it would be insightful to add more about these individuals, and how vocal jazz shaped their lives. It might also be good to mention vocal jazz's role in modern music; who are present-day musicians that use these techniques or draw inspiration from vocal jazz?

Great so far! Good luck editing!