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Lead section, I find the second sentence to be cluttered with the mention of all those other Maya sites with no justification as to why it's one of the most important, I would merge it with the third sentence removing the other Maya sites and emphasizing its representativeness of the local style. The second paragraph mentions sacbes which aren't mentioned in the entire article and claims it's connected to other Maya sites with no source. The same paragraph also includes a redundant sentence noting the buildings for their size. The third paragraph includes an unsourced claim of Nahua influence in cities which are never elaborated on, the same paragraph also describes Puuc style in detail yet the article never connects the word with their descriptions of the site. The last paragraph of the lead section makes more unsourced claims about the Pyramid of the Magician and the Governor's Palace that aren't elaborated on in the article.

Content, the description of the site mentions a certain king "Chan Chak Kʼakʼnal Ajaw" that we never get context to.

Tone, the Governor's palace paragraph includes an independent claim about the significance of the building's decoration which isn't found in any of the cited sources.

Sources, several of the sources belong to a website mayanpeninsula.com which upon investigation appears to have been created by a non-scholar and is used for advertisement of tourist oriented eBooks

Organization, there is a dedicated section to a Maya legend which is only a sentence and this legend isn't elaborated on in the section but it is elaborated on after describing the Pyramid of the Magician in another section.