User:Cerbzzz/Lake Mungo/Edwwards Peer Review

General info
Cerbzzz
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Cerbzzz/Lake_Mungo?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Lake Mungo

Evaluate the drafted changes
I think you've picked a really nice set of references, I notice some authors from class and my own research. I think the sections you've chosen/edited are very well organized and provide the best/relevant archaeological information. I also think it lends to the tone of neutrality that you added information about controversies with certain dating methods. Overall I really like the work you've done!

I don't know much about the Lake Mungo remains so I could be completely off here, but is there any information about where the remains are now? Were they repatriated in any way or did any Aboriginal communities make any claims? That might be something interesting to add.

I am also not sure about this but I think some of your numbers might have to spelled out and some might just stay in their number form if that makes sense. I don't know if Wikipedia has guidelines on this, sometimes it is required that numbers under a certain value stay as they are but over a certain value they are spelled out. Something to look into.

Really awesome and informative work!