User:Ceussai/Food Network/Dlevine1996 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Ceussai


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Ceussai/Food_Network


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Food_Network

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Listing all the names of the chefs for the food network is a good start for your article, from what I see the list appears to be complete. However, you could use an introductory paragraph describing the significance of the chefs, such as whether or not they're still active on the food network. Additionally, a list of chef names by itself doesn't tell the reader much, include information such as when they started working on the food network, as well as notable information about the more prominent chefs. Looking at your sources, the amount you have is reasonable for the information you currently have.