User:Cfarmer4/Opioid epidemic/Khiggin1 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(Cfarmer4)


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Cfarmer4/Opioid_epidemic?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Opioid epidemic

Evaluate the drafted changes
I think that so far, you are making really good edits and adding valuable information! You have added information that emphasizes how big the opioid epidemic is in Canada without changing the tone of the article. I think that it was also a good idea to remove the sentence that you did from the article; it shows that you know when a sentence or phrase doesn't belong and clutters the article. I agree with Dr. Rahn's comment on the article and once you site your sources for those numbers I think it should resolve that issue. I like the organization of the article and your additions as well. By putting your information in chronological order, it is easier to follow the epidemic and how it has grown. I think that to further your additions to the article, it would be interesting to know more about what Canada specifically in order to reduce the number of opioid deaths and maybe some more cited statistics that show whether or not they are working.