User:Cfarmer4/Opioid epidemic/Samuel Raaflaub Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Cfarmer4


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Cfarmer4/Opioid_epidemic?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * opioid epidemic

Evaluate the drafted changes
minimal additions to the article are made so I will be reviewing the article. The lead isn't written as well as it could be. I does give a nice description of opioids and the harms that they can cause. However, it does not reference many of the topics in the article such as the adolescents, canada, other countries, or treatment. The contents of the article is well written and organized. The article looks to have many relevant and up to date sources that are making contributions. There are things that could be talked more in depth about within the article such s other demographics besides women and children. Behavioral causes and outcomes or opioid abuse could be written about ( did you know that a large amount of heroin overdoses happen when drug is taken in a location that is not normal for the abuser due to the opponent processing theory).