User:Cfb49840/Methanobacterium/Ah51352 Peer Review

General info
Cfb49840, Hannah Yousuf, Larissalemuscastro, Lizziecalero
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Cfb49840/Methanobacterium
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Methanobacterium

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead


 * The lead should be updated to include the new information and the key terms used to describe bacteria (mesophile, strict anaerobe, etc). The lead can be written to better encompass this information and improve the flow. This iteration of the lead reads a bit abrupt.
 * The clause "for instance, they lack peptidoglycan in their cell walls" can be excluded as it is basic information that can be found in the hyperlinked Archaea article if readers are unfamiliar with it.

Content


 * The "neither hot nor extremely cold" in the growth temperature section can be cut out to make it more concise.
 * Perhaps include some notable methanobacterium species and their typical habitats as examples in the habitat section?
 * You seem to already be expanding on some important sections to include such as its impact on humans.
 * Examples of Methanobacterium section can use some work. Why are these examples notable? How do they accomplish what they do? Overall, this is a very good start. Keep it going! Content as of now appears unbiased. Some area can use more sources to back up the information. Also try to include pictures if possible.