User:Cfb49840/Methanobacterium/Clairegriffin8 Peer Review

General info
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 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Cfb49840/Methanobacterium
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Methanobacterium

Evaluate the drafted changes
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Lead:

Overall good lead! It is a good length and I like that it addresses that methanobacterium is in fact not a type of bacteria. The third sentence is a little misleading saying that they "live without oxygen." Does this mean they are strict anaerobe or some other type? It is also mentioned that they do not create endospores when nutrients are limited so does that mean they die in nutrient limited environments? Maybe include a summarized aspect of its morphology, just to get an idea of what the cell looks like.

Content:

It looks like the article was pretty limited prior to your additions so I am quite impressed how much you have added. In the examples of methanobcaterium species could probably use more examples. Maybe go into more detail concerning methanogenesis and how it works.

Sources:

At the end of the habitat section there is no citation for the second half of the paragraph

Organization:

The overarching section "Bacterial essentials: growth, survival, and structure" has no desrciption of structure.

Tone and balance:

The tone seems pretty neutral.