User:Cfb49840/Methanobacterium/Kvtietrvn Peer Review

General info
Cfb49840 & Hannah Yousuf & Larissalemuscastro & Lizziecalero
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Cfb49840/Methanobacterium
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Methanobacterium

Evaluate the drafted changes
Article

Everything is very well organized. I like that there are sections that are mentioned and little notes of what their ideas may be for those sections even if the full idea is not fully formulated and presented. The displayed edits are super easy to follow and flows well within every section. As for the ideas not written out just yet: I think those are all great points to add to the official wiki page!

Citations

Almost every statement and sentence is backed up with a citation (except like two but it is easy to tell that it correlates with the last statement that is linked to a citation so not a big deal at all). There is also a good variety of citations!

Balance

My only criticism is that the prior article (before your sandbox edits) lacks so much and is so short, so there's so much potential in adding things. BUTTTTT I'm pretty sure that is already part of your game plan since you are noting on different sections to add and trying to find stuff to mention.

Tone

When reading the sandbox with already published article parts, everything feels overall cohesive and tone is matched up well.

Miscellaneous/ Overall

I have little to none constructive criticism, you guys wrote a good amount as well as great quality work thus far. GOOD LUCK ON ADDING THE REST OF WHATEVER YOU PLAN TO YOUR ARTICLE !!