User:Cfellowss/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
S. I. Newhouse School of Public Communications

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
It's the school I attend, and I was told to choose a relevant article to my field.

Evaluate the article
The article is overall thorough and informative, but suffers from the occasional lack of clarity. The first paragraph is a massive block of text containing all of the school's degree programs, which I feel could be left for the body of the article instead. There are also a few confusing uses of the acronym "SU" without an explanation as to what that means (being a student there, I'm familiar with it, but others may not be). Other than that, it's pretty in depth. The list of famous alumni is long (correctly so, in my unbiased opinion) and thorough, as are the degree programs and even various extracurricular campus activities that, while not affiliated directly with Newhouse, still are relevant enough to a vast portion of its student body to warrant a mention. No gripes with the sources, and aside from my above complaints, the writing is solid. At least a passing mention of the Haudenosaunee indigenous people upon whose land the school rests would have been nice, but I suppose it isn't that relevant to the rest of it. Nothing overly controversial, so no viewpoints to balance. There hasn't been a ton of activity in the talk page, but there's some interesting stuff in there. A 2014 edit changed the page from apparently sounding like a promotional brochure, and there was a funny spat in 2023 over whether or not there should be a space between S and I in S.I. Newhouse. Everything seems up to board.