User:Cficht47152/North Vietnam/Silverkingfish14 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(provide username) - Cfich47152


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Cficht47152/North_Vietnam?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Good:

> Article is straight to the point

>Stayed Neutral

>Covered both Government and People's role

>I got exactly what I was looking for (wanted to know where the structuring of government was inspired by and a basic understanding on how it worked)

>Ordered well enough so far

Improvements Needed:

>Should add more overall info about North Vietnam

>More info on party leader(s)

>Pros and Cons of said party

Good work so far, I know N. Viet. history is a little less discussed, little less popular compared to other countries' histories and it's good you are working on it. I recommend adding a picture(s) of the party and/or its leader(s), don't forget to add a section about the Vietnam War as well obviously. Good Luck

-A.W.