User:Cgagyemang/Hip hop music/Avlangst Peer Review

Peer review
This is where you will complete your peer review exercise. Please use the following template to fill out your review.

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing? Cgagyemang
 * Link to draft you're reviewing: User:Cgagyemang/Hip hop music

Lead
Guiding questions:


 * Has the Lead been updated to reflect the new content added by your peer? There is not a lot of information up there to tell.
 * Does the Lead include an introductory sentence that concisely and clearly describes the article's topic? Yes they do.
 * Does the Lead include a brief description of the article's major sections? No they don't.
 * Does the Lead include information that is not present in the article? No they don't.
 * Is the Lead concise or is it overly detailed? Not at all.

Content
Guiding questions:


 * Is the content added relevant to the topic? Yes it is.
 * Is the content added up-to-date? I have no idea.
 * Is there content that is missing or content that does not belong? There's not enough information to interpret.
 * Does the article deal with one of Wikipedia's equity gaps? Does it address topics related to historically underrepresented populations or topics? Yes, because hip hop is so underestimated and doe not get it's recognition.

Tone and Balance
Guiding questions:


 * Is the content added neutral? Yes it is.
 * Are there any claims that appear heavily biased toward a particular position? No there is not.
 * Are there viewpoints that are overrepresented, or underrepresented? Not enough information to tell.
 * Does the content added attempt to persuade the reader in favor of one position or away from another? Not enough information to tell.

Sources and References
Guiding questions:


 * Is all new content backed up by a reliable secondary source of information? No sources
 * Are the sources thorough - i.e. Do they reflect the available literature on the topic? No sources.
 * Are the sources current? No sources.
 * Are the sources written by a diverse spectrum of authors? Do they include historically marginalized individuals where possible? No sources.
 * Check a few links. Do they work? No sources

Organization
Guiding questions:


 * Is the content added well-written - i.e. Is it concise, clear, and easy to read? Not enough information to tell.
 * Does the content added have any grammatical or spelling errors? No it doesn't.
 * Is the content added well-organized - i.e. broken down into sections that reflect the major points of the topic? Not enough information to tell.

Images and Media
Guiding questions: If your peer added images or media


 * Does the article include images that enhance understanding of the topic? No.
 * Are images well-captioned? No.
 * Do all images adhere to Wikipedia's copyright regulations? No.
 * Are the images laid out in a visually appealing way? No.

For New Articles Only
If the draft you're reviewing is a new article, consider the following in addition to the above.


 * Does the article meet Wikipedia's Notability requirements - i.e. Is the article supported by 2-3 reliable secondary sources independent of the subject?
 * How exhaustive is the list of sources? Does it accurately represent all available literature on the subject?
 * Does the article follow the patterns of other similar articles - i.e. contain any necessary infoboxes, section headings, and any other features contained within similar articles?
 * Does the article link to other articles so it is more discoverable?

Overall impressions
Guiding questions:


 * Has the content added improved the overall quality of the article - i.e. Is the article more complete? Not right now because there is little information to the article.
 * What are the strengths of the content added? Added a sentence.
 * How can the content added be improved? Add more information.