User:Cgoral94/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Presidency of Ulysses S. Grant

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
I chose this article because I have a passion for the life and work of Ulysses S. Grant. I believe that with the great amount of research I have done on his presidency, as well as the common misconceptions surrounding his life, that I have much to offer this article.

Evaluate the article
For the most part, the article is well written. Some areas of improvement would be in the lead section, which reads a little too jaggedly for an introduction to the topic. Additionally, there is some use of culturally outdated language which would require some correction to be sensitive to a wider reading base. Finally, while the images provided in the current iteration of the article are of high quality, more can be added to ensure proper connections can be made between this article and others that relate to it.