User:ChRoseP22/Faye Harrison/ItsAML Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Editing User:ChRoseP22/Faye Harrison - Wikipedia


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:ChRoseP22/Faye_Harrison?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Faye V. Harrison - Wikipedia

Evaluate the drafted changes
Y'all have done so much work! In terms of the lead, I'm excited to see how you're gonna format it once the page is done, especially since you added so much from the original article.

All of the content sections look great, if y'all have time adding an "Early Life" or "Personal" section may help the flow of the article more.

Y'all citing is on point, I went through the article and I didn't see anything that wasn't backed up by a source.

Organizing is good, maybe switching from bullet points in her major publications would make it look sleeker.

All in All, the page looks amazing and y'all have done a lot of work, Faye Harrison will for sure appreciate it!