User:Chairomai/Autoimmune skin diseases in dogs/Akponce Peer Review

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Chairomai/Autoimmune skin diseases in dogs
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 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Chairomai/Autoimmune_skin_diseases_in_dogs?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):

Evaluate the drafted changes
The Article had reliable sources and references. The problem is with the second source listed, it does not open to the page that talks about the immune mediated skin diseases. The end of the first paragraph and start of the second paragraph, it has unnecessary words in bold. The sentence was not finished at the end of the second paragraph. The Article also does not have a title and subtitles.