User:Chairomai/Autoimmune skin diseases in dogs/JermicaJ Peer Review

Synopsis: Autoimmune skin diseases in dogs where the dogs' immune system attacks itself. The autoimmune skin diseases varies depending on type of skin disease and its severity. There were a few edits primary made by user Chairomai on the article.The edits and comments made where a great starting point into really giving info on the symptoms on what the dogs experience when resulting from having an autoimmune disease but does not give enough info on what makes the immune attack itself and in depth information on the two auto immune skin diseases it refers to in the article. The organization of categories of information where very well executed and in sync with the next category of information. Recommendation would be to elaborate a little more on the causes and the diseases that are being mentioned. Great work on having links available and able to be used.

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