User:Chairomai/Autoimmune skin diseases in dogs/Madelineholland99 Peer Review

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Chairoma, Nicnikk, Kcammon, Mahodgen
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 * Link to draft you're reviewing:Autoimmune skin diseases in dogs
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Autoimmune skin diseases in dogs

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I think that this is such a great article to go in full depth with. However, each section has a great start, but for sure add more details. There is not much pictures, leads, citations. The lead is concise but for sure more depth is necessary. The content is up to date, and it is related to the topic. I think for clinical symptoms give more examples of diseases and all the symptoms. Along with a lot more images. Images leave people a lot more intrigued as they are reading. It is easy to read and I have not found any spelling errors. Overall I think this could be a great article when this group is done editing I am excited to see the final article!