User:Chaiteaboba/Memphis Group/CSL12345 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Chaiteaboba


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Memphis Group User:Carolinelamarjewell/Margo Grant Walsh


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Memphis Group

Evaluate the drafted changes
In the third paragraph, the quote[...] may be improved.