User:Chaiteaboba/Memphis Group/Chang1023 Peer Review

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 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Chaiteaboba


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(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

He briefly introduced his personal information, and his past experiences are also arranged in chronological order. And quoted his words very well. The structure of the article is also very clear and the photos are provided for easy understanding.