User:Chaiteaboba/Memphis Group/JovanaOlivas Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(provide username)User:Chaiteaboba/Memphis Group


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Chaiteaboba/Memphis Group


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Memphis Group

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Eveything looks really good. It is well drafted. Maybe can enhance the photos on the current wiki and put new ones.