User:Chaiteaboba/Memphis Group/Jtknott Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Chaiteaboba, Klcruz1, Ychen588


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Chaiteaboba/Memphis Group


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Memphis Group

Evaluate the drafted changes
I really enjoyed reading the content you added to the article. I think all of your information was concise and relevant to the Memphis group. Something that could have been added was why the Memphis group is also known as Memphis Milano. I felt including that fact in the Lead of the article was confusing because it was not explained why this was another name for the group. I also think the sentence stating, "The designs of the Memphis Group have acted as inspiration to many other fashion companies, like Dior and Missoni, who both were inspired to design fashion collections based on Memphis' original work" should have been added to the impact subtitle instead of included in the Designers sections because this is discussing how the Memphis group impacted these other companies. I was also a little bit confused on the inclusion of the quote from Peter Shire and how that quote connected to him being apart of the Memphis Group. Other than these minor changes that could be made, I believe the content of your additions to the article were well worded and provided insightful information on the Memphis Group.