User:ChambaKikii/sandbox

User:ChambaKikii/Group Sandbox <---So click on this and this is the group's sandbox page for the below topic editing.

Choosing a topic: "Microbial Electrolyte Carbon Capture"<-article title

Description: Using wastewater as a means to reduce CO2 in the atmosphere, or as a carbon sink. This idea incorporates the effects of

Where the information will be coming from (BIBLIOGRAPHY):


 * 1) About the carbon capture:
 * 2) Summary:
 * 3) Methods, wastewater
 * 4) Multiple Methods
 * 5) Technical Process
 * 6) "Electro-osmotic-based catholyte production by Microbial Fuel Cells for carbon capture"  https://www.sciencedirect.com/science/article/pii/S0043135415301652
 * 7) "Microbially Enhanced Carbon Capture and Storage by Mineral-Trapping and Solubility-Trapping" -- https://pubs.acs.org/doi/abs/10.1021/es903270w
 * 8) "Microbial Electrolytic Carbon Capture for Carbon Negative and Energy Positive Wastewater Treatment"--  https://pubs.acs.org/doi/abs/10.1021/acs.est.5b00875
 * 9) "The path towards sustainable energy" -- https://www.nature.com/articles/nmat4834
 * 10) Technology involved
 * 11) Actual Patent -- https://patents.google.com/patent/US20080245660A1/en
 * 12) Who is involved
 * 13) Includes researchers, companies
 * 14) Who created the patent
 * 15) current use of patent
 * 16) applicability of patent in other areas
 * 17) countries, states cities
 * 18) shareholders who benefit from this
 * 19) Pros and cons
 * 20) Economy
 * 21) Links to CO2 articles such as carbon footprint, wastewater, Sewage treatment, microorganism s, Sustainable energy, Sustainable living

Other topics of interest (my favorites are with **)

climate change mitigation scenarios - develop more 'wedge' content, compile modeled effects and charts/graphs forecasted by published journals, include links to methods for mitigation, include links for policies that prompted the research of 350ppm-400ppm importance.

Is the purpose of Renewable Energy Sources and Climate Change mitigation only to talk about the document? Otherwise I would be interested in adding the various renewable energy sources as links on this page.

** Carbon footprint page can use updated references

Carbon credi t - word heavy, could be reduced and simplified

** Individual action on climate change can be greatly added to, we can talk about the science behind each of the actions we do in everyday lives such as transportation, food consumption etc. and go into a discussion about human impact on CC, and compile journals that offer solutions to societal impact (separate from industrial impact). This could even spark a discussion on whether supporting certain products would be climate friendly or not depending on whether the companies are coal-energy based or natural gas based/hydroelectric/etc.

Deepwater drilling - we can discuss the hazards of failure, provide long term emission costs, research other alternatives to deepwater drilling in other countries, mention longetivity of renewable energy

Excercise: ARTICLE EVALUATION - Carbon Sequestration

I noticed that "Long-term storage" was used at least three times within the first two paragraphs, and there has to be different language for this.

"are" being pursued instead of "is". I edited it!!

It appears neutral and fact-ly, at least in the intro. I would say the fact based speaking is very well done, but perhaps this article could use revision in terms of making varied language and sentence structure, as it is somewhat lacking in an interesting read. It is incomplete and in serious need of revisions just for the wording, but the content is fine. I ended up removing an incomplete sentence. I will objectively say it is not well written, people did not care that multiple intro sentences start with X is an 'important storage method'- my question is, in what way? They are leaving crucial ideas out or have left vague descriptions, I sense, due to a lack of understanding of the methods. Similarly, not all facts are cited, but many of the citations at the bottom do reference a reliable source.

Conversations on talk page:

Behind the scenes many wikipeople are discussing what I have stated, calling the article a jumble of facts and 'unwiki-fied'. They consider the possibility of merging this with other pages. These authors are really doing their best to reconcile similar articles and, provide good content. It is a long discussion, and part of multiple class assignments. They discuss it more in terms of whether content belongs or should be merged. In class at UCB we discuss the actual methods at great length, the process, the caviats, the long term potential. We discuss content.

My question: Could we add a clarifying description of how exactly these methods contribute to CCS? See:Wetland restoration, deep soil.

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 * 1) Links: Highlight text and push this button to make it a link. stephen hawking The Visual Editor will automatically suggest related Wikipedia articles for that word or phrase. This is a great way to connect your article to more Wikipedia content. You only have to link imkportant words once, usually during the first time they appear. If you want to link to pages outside of Wikipedia (for an “external links” section, for example) click on the “External link” tab. Engineering Toolbox is a website that allows visiting users to taking quick looks at physics equations, setup of chemistry problems, and other engineering formula functions.
 * 2) Cite: The citation tool in the Visual Editor helps format your citations. You can simply paste a DOI or URL, and the Visual Editor will try to sort out all of the fields you need. Be sure to review it, however, and apply missing fields manually (if you know them). You can also add books, journals, news, and websites manually. That opens up a quick guide for inputting your citations. Once you've added a source, you can click the “re-use” tab to cite it again.
 * 3) Citation: Environmental Engineering Science
 * 1) Cite: The citation tool in the Visual Editor helps format your citations. You can simply paste a DOI or URL, and the Visual Editor will try to sort out all of the fields you need. Be sure to review it, however, and apply missing fields manually (if you know them). You can also add books, journals, news, and websites manually. That opens up a quick guide for inputting your citations. Once you've added a source, you can click the “re-use” tab to cite it again.
 * 2) Citation: Environmental Engineering Science
 * 1) Citation: Environmental Engineering Science
 * 1) Citation: Environmental Engineering Science
 * 1) Citation: Environmental Engineering Science

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