User:Chanandrew6/Choose an Article

Article Selection
Please list articles that you're considering for your Wikipedia assignment below. Begin to critique these articles and find relevant sources.

the order of my options is subject to change

Option 1

 * Article title
 * Esther Salas


 * Article Evaluation
 * Start-class rated article about federal judge Esther Salas. Salas, whose been on multiple high profile cases over the last decade, recently experienced tragedy with the murders of her husband and son in a shooting. The article is new and relevant given her current situation. There is plenty of information to add. Already contains the typical sections for a living person's article, just missing the information.


 * Sources
 * https://www.nytimes.com/2020/07/20/nyregion/esther-salas.html
 * https://www.mycentraljersey.com/story/news/2020/07/20/judge-esther-salas-american-success-story/5471169002/
 * https://www.mycentraljersey.com/story/news/crime/jersey-mayhem/2020/07/20/st-joseph-alumnus-daniel-anderl-son-federal-judge-esther-salas-shot-and-killed-familys-north-brunswi/5470180002/
 * https://www.govinfo.gov/content/pkg/CHRG-112shrg71212/pdf/CHRG-112shrg71212.pdf

Option 2

 * Article title
 * St. Joseph High School (Metuchen, New Jersey)


 * Article Evaluation
 * Start-class rated article about St. Joseph High School in Metuchen, New Jersey. The article contains multiple spots without citation and clarification. Additionally, some information is outdated. For example, there is conflicting information in the intro and information box on the right of the page. The organization is fine, however, there is a missing section for academics. There is also substantial missing information in the athletics section.


 * Sources
 * https://www.mycentraljersey.com/story/news/2020/07/07/st-joseph-says-farwell-president-who-served-school-community-five-years/5380428002/
 * https://www.mycentraljersey.com/story/sports/high-school/2019/01/03/saint-joseph-high-school-resurrect-athletics-hall-fame-historic-night/2465114002/
 * https://www.nj.com/highschoolsports/article/st-joseph-met-to-resurrect-athletic-hall-of-fame/

Option 3

 * Article title
 * John Carlson (ice hockey)


 * Article Evaluation
 * C-class rated article about American ice hockey player John Carlson. The article only contains broad information about the player. The main parts the could use fixing and reorganizing are the Junior and Professional career sections. There is no section for early life. Some information in the current Juniors section can be moved over to early life. The intro is short and could use some improvements to better reflect the information in the article. The only fully thorough sections in the article are the "statistics" and "awards and honors" sections.


 * Sources
 * https://www.washingtonpost.com/sports/2020/07/20/capitals-defenseman-john-carlson-named-norris-trophy-finalist/
 * https://www.nj.com/highschoolsports/article/ice-hockey-where-are-they-now-carlson-cutting-ice-in-sochi/
 * https://www.washingtonpost.com/sports/capitals/capitals-defenseman-john-carlson-has-been-skating-toward-his-olympic-dream-for-years/2014/01/29/53f376fc-8922-11e3-833c-33098f9e5267_story.html

Option 4

 * Article title
 * Chino Hills High School


 * Article Evaluation
 * The article is a start-class rated article on Chino Hills High School. After a read through, the main issue present is that the article is missing a section on the most notable aspect about the school, its athletics (specifically its basketball team). Other than that, there are multiple instances of lines without citations. Almost every section in the article can see improvement.


 * Sources
 * https://www.silverscreenandroll.com/2019/5/6/18525823/lakers-lonzo-ball-chino-hills-basketball-onyeka-okongwu-huskies-high-school-lamelo-liangelo-lavar
 * https://usatodayhss.com/2018/chino-hills-no-ball-brother-state-title
 * https://www.championnewspapers.com/sports_and_recreation/article_4c9ffb28-49d3-11ea-9287-d377fd98d9eb.html
 * https://www.championnewspapers.com/sports_and_recreation/article_c9277974-3a40-11e6-90a7-37cd5f9665cd.html
 * https://www.championnewspapers.com/sports_and_recreation/article_7dcc340e-13be-11e6-a187-e70b6fa6eae9.html
 * https://www.championnewspapers.com/news/people/article_feb51172-13d6-11e6-b024-d711d5c1d130.html