User:Chandana Doma/Protein sorting/Mbryan620 Peer Review

General info
Chandana Doma
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Protein_targeting&oldid=1186517732#Chloroplasts
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Protein targeting

Evaluate the drafted changes
This article does look very good. The lead is relevant and somewhat hints at the sections of the article-- however, something could be added indicating what will be included. The changes made by my peer appear appropriate. They added to the chloroplast and mitochondrial matrix sections to expand current information. I think these edits were appropriate and did address content gaps in the article, or helped with a further understanding of the role of those organelles in the topic of the article. The content currently in the article appears unbiased, relevant, and well written. I do not see any glaring grammatical errors and the tone seems to be appropriate. There are many references present, and all appear to be reliable. The source links work and the information in the article seem to accurately reflect what the sources convey. I think the organization of this article is one of its greatest strengths-- it's extremely clearly laid out and flows logically. The sections reflect the most important information about the topic of protein targeting and the subheadings make sense. The pictures give visualization of the mechanisms talked about throughout the article, so I think they're all very appropriate. Overall, I think the article does look very good. I think the best improvement would be to add to the lead so that it includes more information about what will be discussed in the rest of the article. I do also think it could be beneficial to explain the role of protein targeting in the diseases listed, instead of just listing them.