User:Changeyourlife9/Ruth Ella Moore/Amandarychtik Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Changeyourlife9


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Changeyourlife9/Ruth Ella Moore


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Ruth Ella Moore

Evaluate the drafted changes
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There was some information I saw on the sandbox page about her life during the time she was a seamstress. I think the information in the sandbox in the sandbox is already in the article (but I may not be looking at the article before you updated it, if you did). I think the lead of the article is a good synopsis of Ruth Ella Moore and gives a preface to what the article entails. I think something that could be added or developed more is some information about her early life, prior to college. But that would be dependent on the amount of information that is out there about her childhood, at a young age.