User:Channmoon/Pindar's First Pythian Ode/Cpowers20 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Channmoon


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Channmoon/Pindar%27s_First_Pythian_Ode?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Pindar's First Pythian Ode

Evaluate the drafted changes
It seems you only got sources in your sandbox. Your primary is probably a translation of the work used for the article. Having multiple secondary sources is a good start. From what I can see on the article page there is little on Hiero of Syracuse and Typhoon, so adding as much as you can for each will be great. A suggestion I have for you is to add a section on the modern tellings of the poem. Also a section on the history side as well like Heiro's conflict with the Carthaginians.