User:Chantelleh/Musée d'Orsay/SophiaGeyer Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Chantelleh


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Chantelleh/Musée d'Orsay


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Musée d'Orsay

Evaluate the drafted changes
As you continue, organize your sandbox with titles of where each paragraph will go so that the viewer has a better understanding of what they are reading.

Paragraph 1 sounds good but make sure to add citations.

I see that you will be adding another section of how the museum is today, I think this is a good idea but because "today" will not always be today and it will at some point be in the past, maybe integrate the information you find into an already existing paragraph that talks about the museum at different points in time.

Organize the information that has been collected about the Gare d'Orsay either into titles or how it will look in the article. I linked "Gare d'Orsay" to its wikipedia page, you can do this for other things if you feel it would benefit your writing!

Overall great work!