User:CharHobbs/sandbox

Heather's comments
2.25.2019- Good start. I added headings. You should list date, how long you worked and what you did under "work log." Your next step is to copy the part of Edith Margaret Garrud you will improve for this project into this Sandbox. Use a heading so I can tell, okay? Then you need to look her up in Biography in Context through the Butte College library and find out what from there you can add to the page. These websites probably won't work. BBC, maybe. Go for it!

Charlotte's Work Log
3.3.2019- I have added a heading for the section of the Edith Garrud article that I will be editing. I have also copied and pasted this section onto my sandbox. I will be going to the Butte College library tomorrow to do research for my article and gather reliable sources. So far from what I have seen with this section of the article is that there are not any citations to any of the information. With working to make the article better, I will provide reliable sources as to where I get my information.

Section of Article I am Working on
(This paragraph was copied and pasted onto my sandbox from the Wiki article on Edith Margaret Garrud, that I am working on to edit)

She was born Edith Margaret Williams in 1872 in Bath, Somerset. Five years later, her family moved to Wales, where she remained until circa 1893. She married William Garrud, a physical culture instructor specializing in gymnastics, boxing and wrestling. They moved to London, where William found work as a physical culture trainer for several universities. In 1899, the Garruds were introduced to the art of jiu jitsu by Edward William Barton-Wright, the first jiu jitsu teacher in Europe and the founder of the eclectic martial art of Bartitsu. Five years later, they became students at the jiu jitsu school of the former Bartitsu Club instructor Sadakazu Uyenishi in Golden Square, Soho. In 1907, Edith was featured as the protagonist in a short film entitled Jiu-jitsu Downs the Footpads, which was produced by the Pathé Film Company. When Uyenishi left England in 1908, William took over as the owner and manager of the Golden Square school and Edith became the instructor of the women's and children's classes. The Garruds popularised jujutsu by performing numerous exhibitions throughout London and by writing articles for magazines. Beginning in 1908, Edith also taught classes open only to members of the Suffrage movement. From 1911, these classes were based at the Palladium Academy, a dance school in Argyll Street. In January 1911, Edith Garrud choreographed the fight scenes for a polemic play entitled What Every Woman Ought to Know. In August that year, one of her articles on women's self-defence was published in Health and Strength magazine.