User:Charieceb/response

In my peer review, my review said that I only had small grammatical edits and not much more newer content. In the talk page of the original article it was discussed that there are several grammatical issues within the article which made reading the article a chore so therefore edited the grammatical errors. Also in the talk page it is discussed that there may be some parts where there might be original research and my peer review said that they didn't understand why I removed a sentence and I did so because to try and stray away from original research. What I got from this review is to add more content to inform my audience on site collar crime.