User:Charliehojjat/Pierre Paul Émile Roux/Jared Nichols 07 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Charliehojjat


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Charliehojjat/Pierre Paul Émile Roux


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
Overall I think Charlie did a great job. I think that this draft adds a lot of useful information to the article. I think that there are a lot of good details about procedures and developments that Roux made, and they help the reader understand points that are already made in the article. The sources provided are also credible as they look to be from scientific journals. I do think that there can be more reference to his research.