User:Charlottemeans/Qusayr 'Amra/Joe.harkins.richmond Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Charlottemeans


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Charlottemeans/Qusayr 'Amra


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Qusayr 'Amra

Evaluate the drafted changes
Hey Charlotte, I think you had some great contributions to the article. It was good that all of your points were backed up with sources, and your information was very up to date. There are a couple of typos on the main article which you might be able to correct, as well as a few sentences which could be worded a little bit more clearly. I noticed the “Description” section had a few sentences without citations. You might be able to find sources that back up that information. It might help to write a section which briefly summarizes the physical layout/scheme of the building, as well as maybe adding a drawing/diagram if you can find one available to be posted on Wikipedia. Good job!