User:Charlottemeans/Qusayr 'Amra/Shakera Patterson Peer Review

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Charlotte, you added a lot of details to the section about the conservation of the West Aisle and the Tepidarium. The section about the Caldarium does not have a lot of information in it. Did you have issues finding sources about conservation on this part of the Quasar' Amra? If not then I would suggest also editing this section.

The sources that you used to support your writing seem to be good. You cited them appropriately and the footnotes were well placed. I liked the comparison between how Jonah was written in the Quran versus how he was written in the Bible. This depiction on the frescoes makes it more about the story that is told than the decoration itself.

This was well written, good job!