User:Charlottespohler/Reyhan Jamalova/CHand3333 Peer Review

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Team 3


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 * User:Charlottespohler/Reyhan Jamalova


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Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead

- The lead of this paragraph is straight to the point and lets the reader know the basic information. It also gives information on what Jamalova has done/accomplished.

Content

- The history sections gives a background for Jamalova and her inspiration for Rainergy based on her childhood. If possible, I would add more information in her history because the facts in it are a little vague but the information mentioned is relevant.

Tone and Balance

- The tone and balance is neutral but the information i the article is heavily focused Rainergy. If you could add more information, like what Jamalova is doing at University at Pennsylvania currently, to balance out all the information that is focused on Rainergy. The article almost reads like the main subject is Rainergy and not Jamalova.

Organization

-The organization is good as it sections Jamalova's early life in one section and then transitions into Rainergy. There is also basic information at the top of the article that gives a good summary and prepares the audience for what type of information is in the rest of the article.

Images

- There are no images but it wouldn't hurt to add one. If you could add a photo of Jamalova and/or a picture of the symbol of Rainergy, if there is one, under the section for Rainergy I think would help the audience identify with Jamalova and Rainergy.

Overall Impressions

- I think its a solid article but stills needs to balanced out with a little more personal information about Jamalova so that there is at least an equal amount of information about Jamalova's life and accomplishment as well as Rainergy.