User:Charlyhenn/sandbox

Wikipedia Test Run

Point of View - the article is neutral. Any attributes are phrased as "she is considered..." or "renowned as..." The article is very fact based.

Content - the article is quite brief and could be elaborated on if there is accurate information out there. While the sources seem reliable and relevant, most of them date to before 2015. Updated articles are needed to improve the usefulness of this article. I think that her specific work in the medical field could be elaborated on, specifically the studies and committees that she has worked on. Additionally, her education could be expanded on. Because she is such an important figure in Saudi Arabia, it is good to know exactly where her background comes from. Background on Saudi Arabia would be useful to create context for her story.

References - the sources for the most part seem relevant, however there are Huffington post and blogs both cited. These should be checked for accuracy and reliability. Also, all of the sources date to before 2015. Updated information needs to be added.

Article - Yasmin Altwaijri

Edits - I think my main focus for edits will be to add updated information to the article about what she has been doing for the past 3 years because all of the current citations date to before 2015. It is important that there be updates, especially in the scientific/medical field because there are always break throughs. Also, I plan to add edits that clarify the exact state of healthcare and women's rights in Saudi Arabia in order to add more context to her work.

References -

https://www.researchgate.net/profile/Yasmin_Altwaijri

this source includes all of the research studies she has been apart of.

https://www.wamda.com/2014/11/a-day-in-the-life-of-a-top-saudi-business-woman

this source includes more information for her personal biography section.