User:Charris0524/Erotic talk/CalebTerronez Peer Review

You have add a lot of information about erotic talk that I think is useful to the term. One thing I would add is citing more of your sources so that all the information can be confirmed. I would also find more resources to add to your article. For the 8 themes of erotic talk I would go through and define each term and maybe give specific examples. For Sex differences I would do more research on how men and women react to erotic talk and add that to this section. Overall I think you have added a lot to erotic talk wiki and just need to tweak some small changes.

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