User:ChaseArmy/Trauma and first responders/Francisco12barrera Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

ChaseArmy


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:ChaseArmy/Trauma_and_first_responders?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead: One advice I could give you on your lead is that the introductory sentence could describe your article a bit better then it currently does; it could be more descriptive.

Content: I was not able to find anywhere where underrepresented populations where mentioned in your content. Other then that. Honestly I think you nailed it with the content; there seams to be no unnecessary information, as far I can tell all your sources are up to date as well.

Tone & Balance: I believe that your tone and balance seemed appropriate for the article didn't really find you swaying any specific way. With that said I do feel that you could ass a bit more on "Helpful Resource" section.

Sources & References: The biggest and most important thing I would believe I could give you; you could possibly use your references a bit more. Am sure you could find many of your statements can be backed by more then just one of your references.

Organization: Your organisation is great example how to do it. Definitely going to take some pointers from your article; its broken down in proper sections.

Images & Media: Great Images not much to say here either.

Overall Impressions: Overall I can tell you invested a lot of time on your article and it looks great! Good additions to your article I believe they have improved your original article just a couple small suggestions to Polish up your article even further. Great work keep it up!