User:ChaseSub98/Albany Municipal Airport (Oregon)/Noah Chandler Shelton Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Chase Sublette


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Albany Municipal Airport (Oregon)
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * N/A

Evaluate the drafted changes
Overall, I think you did a really good job with your lead. It provides readers with a lot of background information to let them know what your article is about, and you offer numerous sources to back up what you have to say. I especially like how you found information on how many planes reside at the airport, and that the field was the first of its kind in Oregon.

In a couple places, however, I think you might be able to do a little more with citing sources. For example, in your bulletin list under the history heading, you mention useful information about when the site was added to the National Register for Historic Places, but you fail to cite where you procured that information. All in all, that should be a pretty easy fix, since I am assume that you found that date from the primary source offered at the bottom of the article's original stub. Citing information like that may seem like a pretty little thing, but it helps give your article that much more creditability.

After conferring with my fellow breakout room compatriots, I realize now that I was reviewing the wrong draft of your article. Seeing your current work now, I would say that your history section provides a clear and concise chronology of the major developments of the airport, but you still need to cite where you found that information. But otherwise, great work so far!