User:ChaseSub98/Albany Municipal Airport (Oregon)/StaceySmithOSU Peer Review

Prof. Smith comments on Wikipedia first draft
Hi Chase,

I'm putting my comments and questions about your Wikipedia article first draft here. These are the things that I would like you to work on as you develop and finalize the article.

Lead

This generally looks good, but I have a couple of suggestions:

1) Take out the information about the current number of aircraft and put it lower in the article. This seems like a secondary fact, rather than a primary fact that belongs in the lead. This number could also change with the times, so it is better to put it down farther in the article where it won't take center stage.

2) Consider adding a brief sentence to the lead noting that the airport is now on the National Register of Historic Places and indicate the year.

Content

As you likely already realize, the body of the article isn't well-developed yet. It's more of an outline than a full article. Putting all of your factual information into an organized narrative form will be your biggest task before the final version is due.

Style

Stylistic polish is difficult to gauge since most of the article is currently an outline. My general advice to all students is to be sure to proofread and polish carefully before the final version.

References

Find A Grave isn't really a reputable source. Can you find something more scholarly or credible than this? I would like to see you replace this one with a better source, or remove it altogether.