User:Chasew2000/Henry Dircks/Hawddb Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

chasew2000


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Chasew2000/sandbox
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Henry Dircks

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead could benefit from more information.

Added content was relevant and interesting.

The page could use a relevant picture of Henry Dircks if possible.

More sources are needed.

The added information about Dircks dislike of perpetual motion was a cool find.

Response to Peer Review
Many thanks to Hawddb for reviewing my works, here is the plan I have laid out in response to the suggestions.


 * The opening of the section is a little weird and jumps in out of nowhere in the perpetual motion section., I can add a sentence before the quote that adds a little more information. Overall I think that I will try to reorganize this section to flow better as a whole.
 * A picture WILL be added, I actually can't believe I didn't notice there wasn't a picture until now. Right at the top, a picture of Henry will be added, and maybe a second picture near the bottom of the page if I can find one relevant to a section.
 * Work on organizing my bibliography a little bit and add in all of my sources.