User:Chasew2000/Henry Dircks/MaxD02 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Adcmyb


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Adcmyb/Henry Dircks


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Henry Dircks

Evaluate the drafted changes
The content that is being edited/added to article is relevant to the article, adding a section about Henry Dircks' interest in poetry. So far there seems to be a decent amount of content missing. It would be interesting to see more specific details on how studying nature in poetry affected his other works. Shortening the title of his book would help the content flow a bit easier and also adding a citation at the end of the sentence since it is a direct link to the actual book. Adding a link for references one and two would be much better along with one source not from Dircks himself. Overall the content looks neutral and is relevant to the article, just need to add a little more.

Peer review response
Yes, thank you, I am missing content and that is a great idea for finding more on the subject. Ill search more for how his work in poetry connected with his other works. As for articles not written by him, there is incredibly little written about him but given your idea I may be able to search more effectively for one. I do agree shortening the titles will be much better, I was contemplating that for a bit while writing it but wasn't sure. As well, I did completely miss two in text citations referring to the books, so thank you very much for pointing that out! I plan on adding more specifying what he was trying to get out of natural poetry and what he was reviewing in the books. I will also explore how his study of natural poetry effected his other work, namely his work in perpetual motion as I can definitely see a possible connection.