User:Chattrrboxx/John Mulvaney/Natweinstein Peer Review

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Evaluate the drafted changes
I really liked your phrasing in the Theory of Complex Cultures section but I felt lost with the opening sentence. Is there more about Devon Downs in the rest of the article?

Similarly, in the Fromm's Landing opening sentence I found the wording a bit confusing.

Hoping to see more in text citations.

Only minor fixes - Overall, I am super impressed with how concise you were with your sections while still keeping them full of rich info, good luck! :)