User:Chaz Hodge/Georg Olden (graphic designer)/Ecaldwell97 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Chaz Hodge


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Chaz Hodge/Georg Olden (graphic designer)


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Georg Olden (graphic designer)

Evaluate the drafted changes
Overall, the draft looks very well written and covers a broad range of the topic. I found no spelling errors, only a single grammar error, and the formatting is very well done. The topic sets a neutral tone throughout and is very thorough in detail without overcomplicating. The added citations seem to be well sourced.

The grammar error is noted in the last sentence of the second paragraph in the "Personal Life" section. I don't believe the comma between hiring and but is needed.