User:Chazzidy Harper/Glyphosate/Thisisaaronfox Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Chazzidy Harper


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Chazzidy%20Harper/Glyphosate?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Glyphosate

Evaluate the drafted changes
First off this a big topic being that we uses this in our experiment it is but the article to me looks a little to busy and could use some help there by looking at the information to see if it is useful or not because having to much could cause for the important things to be skip. from what you have in your sandbox it look like you are adding things to the work which all the information you seem to be adding has the proper source and seems to be in the everything seems to be balanced and can help add to what your article it trying to get across.