User:Cheerio2/Vertical integration/Dwang74 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

User:Cheerio2


 * Link to draft you're reviewing

User:Cheerio2/Vertical_integration


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Vertical integration

Evaluate the drafted changes
I'm really sorry I only had around 10 minutes to read your article and the live one. Here are some quick impressions.


 * A lot of references seemed to go missing - make sure the original ones you would still like to use in the article are still cited an part of the reflist.
 * Be sure to copy the lead/intro section of the article, as well as any template that are present in the original article, as those seemed to be missing in your draft. If you want to copy over sections that contain templates, I recommend going into the editor and select "source editing" for both the article you are copying from and copying to (it should be a dropdown near the top-right of the editor). That way all the original formatting and templates, including infoboxes and citation lists, will still be there when you copy - will also get rid of the weird  that seems to have gotten there because you copied the live page directly.

Dwang74 (talk) 17:44, 23 March 2023 (UTC)