User:Cheersmate510/Privacy seal/Midnightinterludes Peer Review

Peer review
This is where you will complete your peer review exercise. Please use the following template to fill out your review.

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing? Cheersmate510
 * Link to draft you're reviewing: Privacy Seal

Lead
Guiding questions:


 * Has the Lead been updated to reflect the new content added by your peer? Yes.
 * Does the Lead include an introductory sentence that concisely and clearly describes the article's topic? Yes.
 * Does the Lead include a brief description of the article's major sections? Yes.
 * Does the Lead include information that is not present in the article? Yes.
 * Is the Lead concise or is it overly detailed? Concise.

Content
Guiding questions:


 * Is the content added relevant to the topic? Yes.
 * Is the content added up-to-date? Yes.
 * Is there content that is missing or content that does not belong? Missing some content, but author has comments/plans that address gaps. Could be interesting to add in if privacy seals are not decreasing risk and not too successful, why do they still exist (lack of knowledge from consumers, money thing? way to make money by selling to companies who in turn want customers)?

Tone and Balance
Guiding questions:


 * Is the content added neutral? Somewhat.
 * Are there any claims that appear heavily biased toward a particular position? Yes, it seems like the article is against privacy seals or the language/tone regarding privacy seal is biased.
 * Are there viewpoints that are overrepresented, or underrepresented? Yes.
 * Does the content added attempt to persuade the reader in favor of one position or away from another? Yes.

Sources and References
Guiding questions:


 * Is all new content backed up by a reliable secondary source of information? Yes.
 * Are the sources thorough - i.e. Do they reflect the available literature on the topic? Yes.
 * Are the sources current? Yes.
 * Check a few links. Do they work? Yes.

Organization
Guiding questions:


 * Is the content added well-written - i.e. Is it concise, clear, and easy to read? Yes.
 * Does the content added have any grammatical or spelling errors? Yes, but I added some comments/edits.
 * Is the content added well-organized - i.e. broken down into sections that reflect the major points of the topic? Yes.

Images and Media
Guiding questions: If your peer added images or media


 * Does the article include images that enhance understanding of the topic? N/A
 * Are images well-captioned? N/A
 * Do all images adhere to Wikipedia's copyright regulations? N/A
 * Are the images laid out in a visually appealing way? N/A

For New Articles Only
If the draft you're reviewing is a new article, consider the following in addition to the above.


 * Does the article meet Wikipedia's Notability requirements - i.e. Is the article supported by 2-3 reliable secondary sources independent of the subject? Yes.
 * How exhaustive is the list of sources? Does it accurately represent all available literature on the subject? Yes.
 * Does the article follow the patterns of other similar articles - i.e. contain any necessary infoboxes, section headings, and any other features contained within similar articles? Yes.
 * Does the article link to other articles so it is more discoverable? Yes.

Overall impressions
Guiding questions:


 * Has the content added improved the overall quality of the article - i.e. Is the article more complete? Yes, even more after edits/notes author intends to make are made.
 * What are the strengths of the content added? Really thorough research. Represents the topic holistically and sections break down the concept well.
 * How can the content added be improved? Some specific examples could add to the article