User:ChefJeffLi/Magnetic seizure therapy/Amit.agg318 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing? Jeffrey Li- ChefJeffLiamit.agg318
 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Magnetic seizure therapy
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Magnetic seizure therapy
 * Magnetic seizure therapy

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead: The lead has been updated by the user and provides a concise and brief overview of the chosen topic. The author has added some details throughout the summary, as well as added some citations present in the lead paragraph.

Content: The author has added current up-to-date material, which is also relevant to the topic. He added 3 new subsections labeled Medical Uses, Procedure, and Adverse Effects. More information with accompanying content could be added to expand upon each of the topics.

Sources and References: There are no references included in this article. The new information does have some current use of the citations, but more reliable information will need to be cited and referenced properly.

Organization: The content continues to have a neutral tone and balance, while keeping the information easy to read and understand. There are no spelling or grammar errors and is broken down properly with the subsections the author has added. A thought could be adding bullet points in the Adverse Effects subsection to make it even more easy to read.

Images and Media: There are currently no images in this article and no added images by the user. This article could benefit 1-2 added images about what the Magnetic seizure therapy looks like or what it entails to provide a better understanding of the topic.

Overall Impressions: The content added so far has greatly improved the quality of the article. The addition of more content, references, and images will further enhance this topic.