User:Chelle Angela/OLES2129

Tutorial 1
Today’s Date: 18/03/2019

Article name: Saint Fin Barre's Cathedral

Number of page views in last 30 days: 1,946

Daily Average of page views: 69

Total number of edits: 1,369

Tutorial 2 (activity 2)
The first ever page about The Dholes are quite barren. If I was to be the first one to edit the article I would have separated it into different sections of taxonomy and etymology, behaviors, diet, reproduction and spread. I would also add a picture and description of the animal in the beginning of the article, and perhaps a map of its spread. I would add a more detailed scientific classification below the picture of the animal accompanying the description. It is also important to add its own section for references and in-text citation, instead of just putting one link in the same section as the descriptions. I would change the link put as reference since it does not seem like a legitimate website.

Tutorial 3
Activity 1 article : https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Himacerus_apterus

This is an article about the Himacerus apterus. It is rated as a stub class article with low importance, there are several steps that could be taken to make it into a Featured article level which will be explained below. The article needs to be expanded as it is very short, it lacks the taxonomy, life cycle and behavior section and each category isn't considered complete. The some references are not updated and the link no longer works, these needs to be replaced. it is also important to correct the paraphrasing as it is an exact copy of the reference.

Activity 2 article: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/NCUBE

article needed citation in the company history section

Tutorial 4
activity 1

article: Verbascum thapsus

- informative and clear (info laid out nicely)

- most of them have images that are high in quality and are related to the article/support the clarity of the article

- the sources are cited and reliable

activity 2

I finished the draft and the article is now in the main space.

Tutorial 6
article: Acetic acid

Scholarship

Author’s background: members/comittee of the International Union of Pure and Applied Chemistry

Where was the source published? Cambridge: The Royal Society of Chemistry

Is the information within the source independently verifiable?

yes the information is verifiable

Context

source is from 2013 which is relatively quite updated for the topic.

Intent of information, targeted audience

intent of information is to explain the nomenclature of acetic acid (in the article) although the original book explains nomenclature in organic chemistry as a whole.

Content

Does the source omit important details and overrepresent others? no the source is for general organic chemistry

Is the information fact or opinion? scientific fact

the content is a book listing facts about organic chemistry nomenclature and chemical data.

References and Reference Lists Activity 1
added citation to the following articles :

Contingent interest

References and Reference Lists Activity 2
sources I want to include:

https://vetmed.tamu.edu/news/press-releases/researchers-observe-striking-differences-between-brains-of-wild-domesticated-rabbits/

http://www.scielo.br/scielo.php?script=sci_abstract&pid=S1415-47572012000400010&lng=en&nrm=iso&tlng=en

https://www.sciencedirect.com/science/article/pii/S0018506X98914933

https://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/pmc/articles/PMC4512189/

Tutorial 8
article 1: Cln3

the article is associated with molecular and cell biology, it has been rated a B. The article is laid out and sectioned well, most of the citations seems to be appropriate and verifiable. the explainantions and descriptions are explained quite well, even though its not as detailed as articles with an FA rating. appropriate use of image that supports the text.

article 2:Leymus racemosus

this article is part of the plant wiki project and has been labelled a stub, the article is one long block of text, it would benefit the article to separate the paragraphs in different sections. The article also only contain two branches/ links two other wiki articles. its also not quite descriptive.