User:Chelsea Isbister/Xwalacktun/MuseumHours Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Chelsea Isbister


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Chelsea%20Isbister/Xwalacktun/MuseumHours_Peer_Review?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_peer_review


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * n/a

Evaluate the drafted changes
Hi Chelsea,

I think your tone is perfect, you show a clear understanding of the way Wikipedia articles are written; I can definitely see this as an existing Wikipedia page. It is clear you have done adequate research and put in a lot of effort to make this.

My suggestions, which are not huge at all, are to add some reference images such a photo of him and one of his works. I also think that in the lead you should provide a birthday if you are able to find that. I'm pretty sure you're going to do this before posting but make sure to link all the relevant terms to their existing Wiki pages i.e. Kwakwaka'wakw, Capilano University, Emily Carr University of Art + Design, Vancouver 2010 Winter Olympic Games. Maybe for future research, you can contact Xwalacktun himself and see what he thinks about the article or what you can add to it.Great article ! I have a great feeling this is going to stay on Wikipedia. Good luck!!!